1.15.2012

incalculable tongues













These cats lick at my story with disarming tongues.
With each promise from their mouths I feel
The immense fragility wrapped in me
Unravel and seep through my skin.

I lick at the embedded pleasure
Between your capricious breasts.
My tongue laps at an uncertain memory
Searching to rein the wet weather calm
From a pounding obscurity.

Magpie Tales




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11 comments:

  1. mythopolis12:44

    wonderfully obscure and erotic...

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  2. temporal rooms12:52

    thank you Dan.

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    1. Brian Miller13:37

      nice...the rhymes really cement this...it is different and makes you think to gain meaning...i like that...nice magpie...

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    2. temporal rooms13:40

      thank you Brian.

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  3. Claudia15:55

    wow...cats with disarming tongues and the fragility wrapping and seeping through the skin...felt

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  4. Trellissimo10:50

    I second what mythopolis said

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  5. temporal rooms11:21

    Claudia - thank you.
    ayala - glad you like this thank you.
    Trellissimo - thank you.

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  6. Tess Kincaid11:34

    Gorgeous write...

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    1. temporal rooms11:45

      Tess - do you think so?
      i am never sure of anything i write. thank you.

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  7. Susan Anderson16:45

    I agree with Tess.

    =)

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