when a bird hits the glass. I ran
outside, but even then it was too late,
The snow was melting a silhouette around
him like a shadow growing at sunrise,
draining him of warmth.
draining him of warmth.
It was beautiful.
This morning while stirring the dying
coals of last night's fire
that looked like a burning city I understood once again, I do not
know pain.
I have not suffered.
Really liked this a lot!
ReplyDelete"The snow was melting a silhouette around him like a shadow growing at sunrise,
draining him of warmth."
"...stirring the dying coals of last night's fire
that looked like a burning city..."
Really great lines. I was reminded of Jack London's "To Build A Fire".
thank you Dan.
ReplyDeleteReally beautiful. Great writing.
ReplyDeletethank you my friend.
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