12.25.2011

adoration

There is an essence
From between your legs
An oil devoured by the flames
Of gentle masturbation
From your eyes there resounds
An incandescent tomorrow
On the cheek of a silent stain
Under a trident sun
I have seen lambs
Suckle your breast



7 comments:

  1. This has an ancient kind of vigor to it....like the songs of Solomon....

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  2. an ancient ring to it like the songs of Solomon and the adoration of a woman...the metaphors there such as 'thy breasts are like young roes that feed among the lilies'..or references to oils, sheep and so on....

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  3. Anonymous11:01

    this has such
    a
    smoking, familiar
    voice that i
    absolutely love.

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  4. thank you fatally born.

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  5. mythopolis - i wanted it as a timeless
    piece, but now you mention it.
    the adoration is how i feel toward all women. it's
    how i roll. i laugh.

    thank you my friend.

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  6. Anonymous23:42

    ah...the essence between the legs

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  7. zongrik - a paraphrase?

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