12.17.2011


a field imperfect
fills my mouth with a perfect smile
a drop of water falls
when I touch your hand
a thirst deepens
your back arches

4 comments:

  1. I absolutely love your writings!!!

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  2. thank you man.
    i have been struggling lately.
    thank you.

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  3. Well, they say you gotta suffer if you want to sing the blues...there is a lot of angst in your writings that I can identify with. I don't know, of course the nature of your struggles. I walk some skinny lines myself. Hang in there. There's a lot of stuff that sucks lately. See it, express it, don't let it suck you in. You are too good for that. dan

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  4. sorry Dan for misleading you.
    i am fine right now with my internal struggle,
    good actually.
    my struggle is in formulating it into something
    legible.

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